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Monday 18 November 2013

The Fish of Maui


This is a movie that I edited with a voiceover. It is about The Fish of Maui.
Hope you like it!!
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Monday 11 November 2013

My Presentation's about my Best Friends


This is a presentation about my BEST FRIENDS!!!!
Hope you like it!!!
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Have a great day BYE!!!

Thursday 7 November 2013

Me & My Friends Singing



This is a video of me & my friends singing Someone Like You By Adele. Hope you enjoy!!!

Monday 4 November 2013

My Term 4 Test

Planning:

Characters: Harry, Ketara, grandpa Jo,
Set: New Zealand


Start Writing Here:
All About Me
    Hi my name is Ketara and I’m 11 years old and I live in New Zealand. I have a brother named Harry, he is 13 years old and a Grandfather whose name is Jo. He is going to turn 79 soon. We call him Grandpa Jo because we are use to calling him that. Well I live with my grandpa and my brother because my parents are on a vacation to Hawaii.
My Brother
    I hate my brother because he always scares me by telling me scary stuff about where we live. Being scared by my big brother is not quite fun because he makes me freaked out. One time when we were little, my big brother told me story about the shed at the farm….. He told me that the old people that lived in this house died because the daughter got hanged at the shed by someone.
Shed
    Now that is why I always look at the shed through the windows. Before when I looked out the window I saw someone there and it looked like a ghost because it’s body was transparent. I thought it was real so I was wiping my eyes then I looked and it was there and this time it was looking at me with it’s big eyes. The eyes were black everywhere and the person was wearing a black coat.

    The sky was dark when it was morning, and the air was so windy when it was summer. I was looking out at the shed at the farm. It was a bit creepy and it looked haunted from a long distance. Looking, my big brother came out of know where and yelled “AAAAAHHHH.” I screamed loud and my grandpa Jo heard and called out “ Harry, Ketara. Come here right now.”

    As we were walking, I still had my eyes on the shed. But when I looked back at it, the ghost person wasn’t there. We got to grandpa Jo, he looked at us and said “ You and your brother just woke me up from my sleep…… So what happened.” Ketara replied and said “ Well I was looking out the window and then Harry came and scared me.” so then grandpa asked Harry “ Harry, why did you do that to her” then Harry said “ Because I wanted to.”

This Story is not finished because it was a timing test

My Disappearing Story

  In 1876 in Germany, all of the children were at school.  Everyone was sitting in their desk’s doing their work when suddenly, every single paper and pencil disappeared. Our teacher Mrs Angry Pouch came, stood up and said to all of us “WHERE IS ALL YOUR WORK, WHERE IS ALL MY WORK?”......

  Every single one of us didn’t have a clue where all our work went so, we all went looking for our works. We checked in all the desk’s, in all the bags, in the teacher’s cupboard, in everyone clothes, in the teacher’s draws, everywhere but there was no clue at all.

   One of the children saw a black shadow and it looked like a man wearing a black coat, a kind of spy black hat but we couldn’t his face. The child’s name was Eggalon... He got named that because he is an egg all the time.

   Inside, I felt scared because I was thinking that the black shadow will kidnap us so I closed my eyes and thought about happy things. Dangerously, I opened my eyes and saw that the black shadow wasn’t there and everyone in the whole school was gone. So I looked outside and saw I was clearly the only one left in the country. When I went home, my mother wasn’t there, my father wasn’t there, my sisters & brothers weren’t there, no one was there or anywhere, just me.
   Terrified and scared, I went to the City and checked in the big tower and in the last room I looked in, EVERYONE WAS THERE ALL SQUASHED UP ALL TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!. YEAH I YELLED HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. Later that day everyone went back to their places.

THE END!!!

Friday 1 November 2013

My Imagination Story

Walt: Show not tell when writing a paragraph

Huge heavy steps hit the darkness of a gravel path. Darkness rising above me made me feel like I had frozen in fear. Feeling fear rising in me made me see more dark shadows. As I looked the shadows were actually trees & bushes swishing around.