My Term 4 Test

Planning:

Characters: Harry, Ketara, grandpa Jo,

Set: New Zealand

Start Writing Here:

All About Me

    Hi my name is Ketara and I’m 11 years old and I live in New Zealand. I have a brother named Harry, he is 13 years old and a Grandfather whose name is Jo. He is going to turn 79 soon. We call him Grandpa Jo because we are use to calling him that. Well I live with my grandpa and my brother because my parents are on a vacation to Hawaii.

My Brother

    I hate my brother because he always scares me by telling me scary stuff about where we live. Being scared by my big brother is not quite fun because he makes me freaked out. One time when we were little, my big brother told me story about the shed at the farm….. He told me that the old people that lived in this house died because the daughter got hanged at the shed by someone.

Shed

    Now that is why I always look at the shed through the windows. Before when I looked out the window I saw someone there and it looked like a ghost because it’s body was transparent. I thought it was real so I was wiping my eyes then I looked and it was there and this time it was looking at me with it’s big eyes. The eyes were black everywhere and the person was wearing a black coat.

    The sky was dark when it was morning, and the air was so windy when it was summer. I was looking out at the shed at the farm. It was a bit creepy and it looked haunted from a long distance. Looking, my big brother came out of know where and yelled “AAAAAHHHH.” I screamed loud and my grandpa Jo heard and called out “ Harry, Ketara. Come here right now.”

    As we were walking, I still had my eyes on the shed. But when I looked back at it, the ghost person wasn’t there. We got to grandpa Jo, he looked at us and said “ You and your brother just woke me up from my sleep…… So what happened.” Ketara replied and said “ Well I was looking out the window and then Harry came and scared me.” so then grandpa asked Harry “ Harry, why did you do that to her” then Harry said “ Because I wanted to.”

This Story is not finished because it was a timing test