Richard Whitehead is a awesome Great Britain Athlete from the Paralympics.Winning a gold medal at the Paralympics made him happy for himself. With his flag he ran around the track swinging it and waving.The crowd goes so wild like animals that they almost jumped out onto the track.
I really like your paragraphs and your sentence beginning. Your picture is so cool and I really like your voice when you were recording. You had a nice strong voice! KEEP UP THE COOL AS AS AS! WORK!!!!!!!!!
Hi Jennifer, My name is Rachael Gordon. I am in Dr. Strange's EDM310 class at The University of South Alabama in The United States. I really loved your paragraph about Richard Whitehead. Did you know that he broke the world record when he won the gold medal this year? I think he is an awesome athlete too. I also like your picture of him, nice work! Rachael Gordon
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Hi Jennifer,
I really like your paragraphs and your sentence beginning. Your picture is so cool and I really like your voice when you were recording. You had a nice strong voice! KEEP UP THE COOL AS AS AS! WORK!!!!!!!!!
LOVE HANNAH! :)
Hi Jennifer,
My name is Rachael Gordon. I am in Dr. Strange's EDM310 class at The University of South Alabama in The United States. I really loved your paragraph about Richard Whitehead. Did you know that he broke the world record when he won the gold medal this year? I think he is an awesome athlete too. I also like your picture of him, nice work!
Rachael Gordon
Hey Jennifer,
You worked really hard on that! Yeah, the crowd did go wild like animals.
KEEP IT UP JENNIFER!!!!!!
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