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Friday, 19 October 2012



Going to get ready for Trick Or Treating, me and my cousin Paula had to share the same bucket because we did not know that he would be here for a holiday.
I was dressed as a crazy clown with a red dress, a red nose and last of all a rainbow afro and my cousin was dressed as a super ninja. As we went our way we came to a house with creepy Halloween things outside their house.We went on and on until our bucket was full.
Arriving back home, we looked at the lollies. My cousin just took the bucket from me. He said “It’s my lollies”“no its not they are mine too” I said in an angry voice. I took it away from him and he was still holding on to it and the bucket broke in half and the lollies fell down. I really hate sharing.

Thursday, 18 October 2012

The Witches

My big sister meet a witch when she was playing in our front yard.The witch said “Hello little girl come over here and I will give you a little treat”....... so, my sister went to her and the witch actually was tricking her and my sister felt for it so bad.As my sister went to her, the witch she straight away grabbed her and disappeared so fast......It was like she just span and disappeared like a light.Inside my house we were getting ready to eat so my mu said “Go call your sister from outside to come and eat” so I went outside to call and she was gone.Running so fast inside,I almost tripped over and fell but, I went to fall when my big brother catches me.I went to my mum and said “Mum she is gone.She is not outside in that backyard”.......Then my mum said “What she is gone” “Yea” I said.  “I think some of the kidnappers came and took her or witch” I said then my mum said that is impossible a witch”.... I said “Yea a witch” “honestly some kidnappers...hahahahahahaha” my mum said.I said “It’s not funny mum i’m serious about this”.

Wednesday, 17 October 2012

The Flood


In Tokyo there was a flood. Tokyo is one of the perfect city in Japan right....But not so perfect
In Tokyo, the kids and parents didn’t  know that there is a flood heading their way. There were parents that were worried about important things in their houses so, they started putting them up high so it doesn’t get wet. Mum was shouting “come and help me you lazy kids.”

Tom is 10 years old and he lives in Tokyo too. His parent and himself was the first ones to know the flood was going to them. Tom likes to jump in waters like the pools and the beaches.

As Tom jumped into the water, he was happy, but as soon as he hit the water his heart was beating so quickly he wanted to get out because he was embarrassed people was teasing him and calling him names. He felt two hands lifting him up and it was his mum. Looking so angry his mum and took him inside as quick as she can so she can help him.

They made it into the house and mum was so angry so she growled him.

Monday, 15 October 2012

Wednesday, 12 September 2012

My 50 Words Story About Richard Whitehead


Richard Whitehead is a awesome Great Britain Athlete from the Paralympics. Winning a gold medal at the Paralympics made him happy for himself. With his flag he ran around the track swinging it and waving.The crowd goes so wild like animals that they almost jumped out onto the track.


Here is my recording

Monday, 10 September 2012

My Story about The Famous Tommy Kapai Wilson


Friday was incredibly awesome because we got to meet an amazing story writer that was maori.He’s 


name was Tommy Kapai Wilson.As we walked into the hall we saw him on the stage putting some books and some piture things.



Telling the school about his family was kinda fun.He told us that in his family, there are 11 kids.While we were listening to him talking, he told us a story about what jobs he had to work for like (Being a Butler and working for some people that are rich.



Asking us a question was cool because he asked us what is a Butler and this boy from my class called Iisa answered and said “It’s someone who gives you whatever you want whenever you want it” and he said “aaaaa Kapai”.The other answers  were wrong and every time someone say something that is wrong he say’s “aaaaa Kao” and then we will laugh.



I had so much fun meeting Tommy Kapai Wilson.I had a lot of fun and he made us laugh and smile.That is what makes him funny and amazing.

Tuesday, 4 September 2012

Practice re-crafting Aldoras Paragraph

This is Aldoras Blog where you can see more of her storys

Today we practiced recrafting a piece of writing.The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second one is mine.

As we were getting near some more puddles, I realised that the track was dangerous. Jogging carefully down the slippery stairs I nearly slipped but luckily I held onto the tree. I was happily saved by the tree.


As I ran up towards the stairs, I reached some-more muddy puddles.Looking down at my shoes, they were all dirty and gross.  “Wow this is a very scary and yucky race” I thought to myself as I ran through the squishy grass.